I've updated the look and message of the posters. Do they convey the thought a bit better or at least make the viewer curious to find out more?
I've also got another idea that I developing that I will post over the weekend.
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15 years ago
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I think the votery one is way improved. It looks a lot more like it's communicating a message in an ice cream parlor style rather than before where it just looked like an advertisement for ice cream. The copy is simpler and more on target and I like the negative space around the bottom that allows me to appreciate the background texture.
I'm not sure about the second one; it seems a little ambiguous still because it doesn't really explain why I'm not alone or why it's being spelled out in the sky. However it's definitely less confusing with the green stuff removed at the bottom. I just think it needs a little something to tie it together or explain the concept.
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